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General => Off Topic => Topic started by: Numsgil on August 08, 2005, 09:25:56 AM
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Just thought I'd show and tell. This is the first panel of a webcomic I am attempting. I'll probably add the barest left bit of a door on the right wall when I can get it to look right.
Post your thoughts/comments so I can refine it.
(http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2591/panel1copy3pe.jpg)
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LOL , were can I see the whole thing?
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I'm not sure where I'm going to post the finsihed project to. Drunk Duck (http://www.drunkduck.com) offers free hosting. I may make a subsection of the Darwinbots domain house it (seeing as how the majority of server costs were paid by myself) or I may have my sister host it on her domain.
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And it's done, tell me what you think. (It's a clicky since it's rather large).
(http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/5612/comic15aq.th.jpg) (http://img353.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic15aq.jpg)
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Yer Bunny always seems to be pissed off. :)
Is this just some kind of character flaw or is he just having a bad week?
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I have no idea, I guess I'll have to wait and see :D The idea of a pissed of cute little bunny rabbit must really make me happy :D
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Perhaps in the next strip he should go to anger management classes. That would be cool. B)
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A bit short but good. I did have a bit trouble with humer, exsept for the fact that he is pissed of all the time as PY already pointed out. The art is SKILL though.
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I'm not sure it's terribly funny. I just wanted something to practice with, so I probably sacrificed a bit in the writing.
Art took me about 3 and a half days. Way too long for a strip, but then alot of that time was me experimenting.
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I don't get it.
*suddenly realises the sheer pain numsgill will give at such a reply*
The art's great, though! ;)
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Actually I got that reply from some other people too. And I'm pretty thick skined anyway :) I didn't refine the joke as much as I should have. I'm currently refining my art style some more. It's going to be damned cool :lol: